Comments on: Hancock vs. Tonight, He Comes: What Is, What Was, & What Will Smith Could Have Been

By: Picvegita

Picvegita — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 21:05:34 +0000

Hi I would greatly appreciate it if anyone could send me any copy of the “Tonight, he comes” script, I would have loved to have it as a film but I’ll take it as a script anyday!!

Guyver_14606 AT yahoo.com

Thanks in advance :)

By: Picvegita

Picvegita — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 21:05:00 +0000

Hi I would greatly appreciate it if anyone could send me any copy of the “Tonight, he comes” script, I would have loved to have it as a film but I’ll take it as a script anyday!!

Guyver_14606 AT yahoo.com

Thanks in advance :)

By: Jim

Jim — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 19:30:42 +0000

Hey Radek,

If you don’t mind, could you send the draft with page 125 and the later draft of the screenplay to me as well? Thanks!

bondo662000 AT yahoo.com

By: Jim

Jim — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 19:30:00 +0000

Hey Radek,

If you don’t mind, could you send the draft with page 125 and the later draft of the screenplay to me as well? Thanks!

bondo662000 AT yahoo.com

By: Rob Hunter

Rob Hunter — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 13:05:52 +0000

@ Radek, I did get it. Reading it today… thanks again!

By: Rob Hunter

Rob Hunter — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 13:05:00 +0000

@ Radek, I did get it. Reading it today… thanks again!

By: Radek

Radek — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 10:50:34 +0000

Rob,

Did you get my e-mail?

By: Radek

Radek — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 10:50:00 +0000

Rob,

Did you get my e-mail?

By: Wes

Wes — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 14:51:58 +0000

Rob, thanks for the article, I have been crazy with curiosity, as to what could have been. Sounds like the script deserves publishing.

By: Wes

Wes — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 14:51:00 +0000

Rob, thanks for the article, I have been crazy with curiosity, as to what could have been. Sounds like the script deserves publishing.

By: Claudia

Claudia — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 12:48:38 +0000

Thanks Radek, you can reach me through this email: everwen45@gmail.com
Thanks again.

By: Claudia

Claudia — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 12:48:00 +0000

Thanks Radek, you can reach me through this email: everwen45@gmail.com
Thanks again.

By: Radek

Radek — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 12:14:46 +0000

Claudia,

Sure, but how can I contact you?

By: Radek

Radek — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 12:14:00 +0000

Claudia,

Sure, but how can I contact you?

By: Rob Hunter

Rob Hunter — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 04:10:19 +0000

@ Radek, Thank you! I’d checked a few online sources and they were all missing the same page. Couldn’t fathom how Mary survived… forgot about the damn cape! I’d love to take a look at the later draft you have. Is there a link to it, or can you send it to my fsr email? rob@filmschoolrejects.com

Thanks again!

By: Rob Hunter

Rob Hunter — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 04:10:00 +0000

Thanks again!

By: Claudia

Claudia — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 03:04:49 +0000

Yeah, I’ve read that one with page 125 included, except that mine had page 98 missing -the one where Hancock kills the hoodlum- I really liked the script and it’s really a shame nobody had the cojones to go that route, but as much as I want to, I can’t really blame them for that.

Radek, you say you have another draft, is there chance I can give it a look?

By: Claudia

Claudia — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 03:04:00 +0000

Radek, you say you have another draft, is there chance I can give it a look?

By: Radek

Radek — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 01:53:00 +0000

Below is page 125, taken from another copy that’s making the rounds. I also have a later draft (also much different than the movie) if you would like to take a look, Rob.

Here’s the missing page:

We pause – to let his soul cave in.

Horus reaches for her hand. Holds it… till death do you part…

MARY
Horus…

Horus leaps to his feet – stunned.

MARY
(continuing)
Get me out of here.

He digs into the heap, unearthing rocks. Roheim pitches in.

There and beneath it all – Mary, wrapped in Hancock’s CAPE, spared by this SUPER-apparel.

Horus. Mary. A husband-wife embrace. Aaron, he comes running into their arms.

Hancock beholds this twist of fate. Then, he stares at his hands – the tears. The TEARS. A CHUCKLE as he tries to fathom this event.

And another chuckle.

It’s quiet all of a sudden. The rain – it has stopped. Morning dawns on this new day.

Hancock rises from his stoop. Gathers his faculties. He walks over – rejuvenated. Horus rises in defensive posture to greet him.

They stare at one another.

Hancock fixes his gaze at Mary. A beat.

Mary moves to him. Hands him his CAPE. She says…

MARY
Thank you.

He takes it. Examines it, like a man rediscovering some forgotten dream.

Hancock fastens it back – silent. He turns… and fades into blue sky.

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By: Radek

Radek — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 01:53:00 +0000

Below is page 125, taken from another copy that’s making the rounds. I also have a later draft (also much different than the movie) if you would like to take a look, Rob.

Here’s the missing page:

We pause – to let his soul cave in.

Horus reaches for her hand. Holds it… till death do you part…

MARY
Horus…

Horus leaps to his feet – stunned.

MARY
(continuing)
Get me out of here.

He digs into the heap, unearthing rocks. Roheim pitches in.

There and beneath it all – Mary, wrapped in Hancock’s CAPE, spared by this SUPER-apparel.

Horus. Mary. A husband-wife embrace. Aaron, he comes running into their arms.

Hancock beholds this twist of fate. Then, he stares at his hands – the tears. The TEARS. A CHUCKLE as he tries to fathom this event.

And another chuckle.

It’s quiet all of a sudden. The rain – it has stopped. Morning dawns on this new day.

Hancock rises from his stoop. Gathers his faculties. He walks over – rejuvenated. Horus rises in defensive posture to greet him.

They stare at one another.

Hancock fixes his gaze at Mary. A beat.

Mary moves to him. Hands him his CAPE. She says…

MARY
Thank you.

He takes it. Examines it, like a man rediscovering some forgotten dream.

Hancock fastens it back – silent. He turns… and fades into blue sky.

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